SUBJECT>Re: Resolution and Other Things POSTER>Yoly EMAIL> DATE>1107789263 IP_ADDRESS>CFGW78.mybrighthouse.com PASSWORD>aaiEZds5BDMEY PREVIOUS>83108 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Hi Barbara-

Thank you for stopping in and leaving me your impressions. I appreciate it.
Glad some was yummy.
Let's see if the revision fairy visits me. :)

Peace,
Yoly

: Some of your lines are just yummy, but this
: needs to be cut. After the firecracker 2nd
: stanza, it went downhill.

: First, I really love: "particular as
: DNA,"
: "procrastination takes physical shape like
: limp buttonholes," and "windows
: for the
: stay-at-home ghost."

: If nothing else, I'd find a way to end with
: this stanza.

: But what does: "I imagine naming garbage
: liners
: might have been someone’s task" have to do
: with the rest? Nothing, really. I'd cut
: this.

: "Setting" is not a very strong verb.
: Frankly, it's rather ambiguous, considering
: all the many and sundry meanings it does
: have. (Look it up in the dictionary. I think
: the last time I looked, I counted 71
: meanings for 'set'.)

: Hope to have been of help. -- Barbara S.

: PS: the "smell of 90's labor"? Man,
: that's got to be ripe! (grin)