SUBJECT>Re: But Straighten Yourself a Little POSTER>Hannah EMAIL>hrcraig@gmail.com DATE>1107877702 EMAILNOTICES>no IP_ADDRESS>fgw.msa.com PASSWORD>aamfaEF9hh1V6 PREVIOUS>83167 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Hey Michael-

I agree that there’s a balance to be struck between keeping enough of this slightly loopy “narrating” voice and yet not overdoing it. This was def. one of the things that prompted me to post…so I’m pleased that you could offer some assistance in that area. Ann-Marie had a similar suggestion…I will most likely abridge that opening in the next revision.

Thanks for the help!

-Hnnh