SUBJECT>Re: Reporting Rust POSTER>Christopher T George EMAIL>editorcg@yahoo.com DATE>1107889731 EMAILNOTICES>no IP_ADDRESS>mail.acog.org PASSWORD>aaXga4uf0tS3k PREVIOUS>83215 NEXT> 83226 IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>
: He drips sparingly: a leaky faucet
: over porcelain,
: divides their light
: quiet as unfinished life
: though ubiquitous,
: thinks she will not
: perceive his exit.
: But she knows
: immature ghosts
: leave smoke rings
: in their wake.
Hi Yoly
This comes across as a cleanly written and satisfying poem about a relationship. Very nicely done.
Chris