SUBJECT>Re: diner story #1 POSTER>Christopher A. EMAIL>nameisdenvermax@yahoo.com DATE>1107972494 IP_ADDRESS>129.237.189.216 PASSWORD>aaNgx.7BN5rPM PREVIOUS>83264 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

: overall, i think you need to make this more
: interesting, a little more alive with music

ah, yes, music, this does need. I feel like I've written many things which need to be more alive with music. I often write them inspired by music, and alone, as words on a page, they are never the same as I saw them, or wanted them to be.

thanks for the comment.