SUBJECT>Re: The Noise It Makes/Leaves POSTER>David Ayers EMAIL>ayersd@bellsouth.net DATE>1108045033 IP_ADDRESS>167.230.38.115 PASSWORD>aad8wJMWsCmq2 PREVIOUS>83267 NEXT> 83306 IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>
Lawnmower man. cool. I like the everydayness and the weird sorta (manic) sense this gives me.
I just had two minor nits.
1. I think this could go:
: Time, after all, is money.
2. I was hoping there would be another 'how' at the end of this thing. Or something equivalent. More descriptive visual-auditory, more concrete I guess. Seemed like it would have been more consistent.
I like this though because i hate to mow. The prep-work really. Once you're out there it's not too bad.
--D