SUBJECT>Re: The Noise It Makes/Leaves POSTER>Si mon EMAIL> DATE>1108148907 IP_ADDRESS>199.184.88.166 PREVIOUS>83314 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

thanks amy -- good insight into what is needed at the end -- thanks -- s.

: Si mon,

: I like the opening line. I'm comforted by the
: reference to what I can assume was the title
: "It" right away. I begin here to
: trust that the pronoun was not thrown out
: vaguely or broadly for want of a more
: specific term, but that the poem itself will
: explore "it". "It starts in
: the lot..." (The only unsatisfying
: aspect comes perhaps then at the end where
: the only "it" is clearly just the
: lid and I think the "It" of the
: first word is talking about so much more
: than just the lid. Finish what you started
: is all...)

: Otherwise, enjoyed it, I love the POV of banal
: things. Cheers,

: Amy