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Hi Bowen,
Shark tank I can handle, true poets and critics is what I have been missing. Thanks for the warm welcome by comment.
There are some major surface attractions in this poem. Yes, the star-filled page is definitely one of them. Thanks for catching me on it, I knew I was pushing it.

s.

: Supposedly, this place is a "shark
: tank."

: This was fun on the first and second read, but
: I get thrown out on the third by the
: "star" line. Overall, I enjoyed.
: Not major nits.