SUBJECT>Re: After being hit by the bus that I should have. POSTER>Jack M. EMAIL> DATE>1108800828 IP_ADDRESS>1Cust1114.an3.den10.da.uu.net PASSWORD>aa3rfqIypCINk PREVIOUS>83592 NEXT> 83725 IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

one more thing:

I think the relationship between the body of this poem and the title deserves further exploitation, emphasis. Somehow. The body of the poem is probably the place to do it. But that's what I keep thinking about as I go away is that the title and the poem--I mean, I get the metaphoric use of the title, but what interests me is a literal view of the title in relation to the poem--I keep thinking about that literal meaning and what it could do to the poem. I think it's an opportunity that's not fully taken advantage of.

How to do it? Well, of course, that's up to you.

Cheers.