SUBJECT>Re: The Poem Revised POSTER>Si mon EMAIL> DATE>1108998212 IP_ADDRESS>199.184.88.166 PREVIOUS>83496 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

thanks asher -- i think i need to step out of my revision stage -- s.

: Si mon--this is an engaging little piece. I
: like line 3 particularly, (Line 3 never
: wakes) and Line 6. Thanks for posting this
: piece.

: Line 1 yawns, pulls the covers off