SUBJECT>Re: Blended Roast POSTER>Bowen EMAIL> DATE>1109170359 IP_ADDRESS>68.95.106.173 PREVIOUS>83750 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Yes, yes! You're right. I'll take this somewhere else in the revision and hopefully dress up the language.

A. Bowen

: the flatness of this poem is its strength --
: but i am very disappointed by the last line.
: it's as if the poem has nothing to say, and
: then says it.

: i think the shaken off dreams is borderline
: cliche.

: i like everything up until the end -- but maybe
: its just me...maybe in my head, there is
: something more.

: enjoyed --