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"From the Mountains " (for Laurie)

^^ suggested title

Very lyrical & narrative - engaging

Esp liked the similes in 2.

Might consider:

Some say the dragons are starved with anger

Re the last & close as:

Later, he promises her roses and a drunken moon.
Hungry, the babe crawls over the brook to home;
the maid sleeps a servant’s, tired, dreamless.
The lady pins a faded flower to the left side of her hair.
I walk down the trail in search of new

sandals, dragons, respite from the heat,
hibiscus gardens and roasted crickets

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MV