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"From the Mountains " (for Laurie)
^^ suggested title
Very lyrical & narrative - engaging
Esp liked the similes in 2.
Might consider:
Some say the dragons are starved with anger
Re the last & close as:
Later, he promises her roses and a drunken moon.
Hungry, the babe crawls over the brook to home;
the maid sleeps a servant’s, tired, dreamless.
The lady pins a faded flower to the left side of her hair.
I walk down the trail in search of new
sandals, dragons, respite from the heat,
hibiscus gardens and roasted crickets
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MV