SUBJECT>Re: Climbing to Redemption -- Revised (CTG) POSTER>Christopher T George EMAIL>editorcg@yahoo.com DATE>1109630706 IP_ADDRESS>pcp02822717pcs.mtromd01.md.comcast.net PASSWORD>aaXga4uf0tS3k PREVIOUS>83986 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME>Poems by Christopher T. George LINKURL>http://chrisgeorge.netpublish.net/index.htm

: christopher-

: this is an instance where the poet should go
: with his instincts: this should remain as
: written.

: its style is descriptive, but it's a style that
: works well here. i enjoyed the climb with
: you and felt the same sort of pantheism i
: feel when i read gary snyder's poetry. there
: is a spiritual side to this poem that
: perhaps has eluded other readers thus far,
: but i've found in the details themselves.

: the only change i'd make is to remove 'to' from
: the title-- and i think the idea of
: redemption being found in a relationship, on
: the side of a mountain- is a wonderful one
: indeed.

: STP

Hi STP

Many thanks for your support and your interest, STP.

Chris