SUBJECT>Re: You must hold me in your lap while the news is POSTER>Sherry EMAIL>ranch@rocketmail.com DATE>1109661140 IP_ADDRESS>69-161-206-253.clspco.adelphia.net PASSWORD>aapDmzY55pzBE PREVIOUS>84055 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Any little bit of terrific I can get is fine with me.
You reign me in, Metz. And I like a lot of your read. I'll use some
of the deletions for sure. But I've just gotta go OTT sometimes!
I must keep my bourgeois, and I will let you have the infant ooze
of rot. *grin*

I will think about the first of the poem and rewrite it.

Thanks for commenting, I always enjoy your thoughts.

s.

: No, it's not terrific. Parts are. But it's
: uneven. Though evenness is something you
: seldom strive for, is it?

: Notes below.

: -- Metz
: [: Media moments, media head,
: -- all this is completely unecesary, as the
: media content is in the title and the
: age/wisdom content is made clear below.
: -- all of above great
: -- bourgeois gets too didactic. not that the
: rest isn't.
: -- infant ooze of rot is OTT and cheapens the
: rest. the rest skirts the edge without going
: over.

: -- down to the roots of our fruit and the final
: line are, again, great.