SUBJECT>Re: The Morning After POSTER>Si mon EMAIL> DATE>1109772380 IP_ADDRESS>199.184.88.166 PREVIOUS>84086 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

thanks -- I might be happy with someone running away screaming from one of my poems -- but i would hope they had read more than three lines.
Some day.

So your advice is to drop the first stanza, and try to make something out of the second. That might work.

Thanks.