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Mr. Halitsky,
A belated welcome to the Block. Regarding your comments to Mr. Metz: I would hope you apply your new found knowledge to your next poem - you may even come with a piece worth a second reading, and perhaps a comment or two. I sense a real talent here, so make it simple. You may surprise yourself with the results. It is just the WORDS.
regards, dmjones
: Metz -
: I confess I am learning from you.
: 1) Adopt a flat plainspeak voice and diction;
: 2) mix in just the right amount of
: post-everything sardonic archness, being
: sure to indicate with subtle cues that you
: can't possibly mean what the piece is saying
: at face value;
: 3) most importantly - talk about yourself.
: Thanks for another lesson! How much was that
: again?
: David Halitsky