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I adore this but I am not sure of ending, do you like? Dorrianne Laux once told me the best thing you can do for a poem is over write it and let it take on a life of its own. I would let this poem go on for a bit, the start is so wonderful, picks up speed and then poof it stops. Plus I would loose the quote, the poem is far better and with the title everyone know what was exspected of women then.