SUBJECT>Re: Three Ways to Interpret Rain POSTER>Sachi EMAIL> DATE>1110106740 IP_ADDRESS>s01i36-0149.no.powertech.net PASSWORD>aahjAZfa05xEY PREVIOUS>84256 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Dear Geoff

Thanks for your comment. Having workshopped with you for a while here and elsewhere, I know even a grudging affirmation from you is hard earned, so I am glad you liked the first half.

This was not intentially a dream piece..more in the tradition of Calvino..a poem in a poem..but I dislike explaining so I will stop and work on it.

Talking of dreams I suppose its poor writing than any universal law, as you might know there are many great ones written in the dream mode..Ancient Mariner many think is the greatest poem of all...but the craft there was diffrent of course.

There is always much to learn from your crits..thanks for stopping. Regards

Sachi

: Re. Three Ways to Interpret Rain.

: For Sachi.

: This strikes me as a dream piece. Metz's Law On
: Dream Pieces reads, The first half is
: interesting but the second (as dreams are
: not truly creative) fizzles out to naught.
: This was all over the place.

: Best,

: Geoff

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