SUBJECT>Re: poem with footnotes POSTER>David Ayers EMAIL>ayersd@bellsouth.net DATE>1110156848 IP_ADDRESS>adsl-215-163-10.aep.bellsouth.net PASSWORD>aad8wJMWsCmq2 PREVIOUS>84304 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Sachi, that's an interesting idea, too. Maybe I could format the poem to do that.

Appreciate the comments. I am not 100% sold on the title, either. Maybe it needs a new one.

--D

: Hi David

: I like the style. Smooth.

: However, it is not immediately clear why this
: is titled thus.

: While reading I thought it might be an idea to
: structure the poem in an way that the reader
: goes top down when falling and bottom up
: when rising..and read it that way..it was
: fun.

: Regards