SUBJECT>Re: Rendered (CTG) POSTER>Christopher T George EMAIL>editorcg@yahoo.com DATE>1110397637 IP_ADDRESS>mail.acog.org PASSWORD>aaXga4uf0tS3k PREVIOUS>84489 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME>Christopher T George LINKURL>http://chrisgeorge.netpublish.net/index.htm
: CTG -
: If open for revision, please consider: 1) --
: and Walt Whitman, Bard of Camden.
: -- and Walt Whitman, once of Camden.
: 2) wagons spirited papers of the founders
: Wagons don't "spirit", except maybe
: in Clint's movies.
: Maybe: wagons hauled the papers of the Founders
: or
: wagons carried papers of the Founders
: (You don't really need a strong meaningful verb
: here, because the image is itself strong
: enough to carry and "expected"
: verb.
: In general: a little lush for my own taste in
: spots, but well-done.
: Good conceit.
: Well handled.
: About SOMEthing.
: David Halitsky
Hi David
Thanks. I appreciate your suggestions.
Chris