SUBJECT>Re: Detour (Waiting for Ann Savage) POSTER>alex stolis EMAIL>baudelairious@aol.com DATE>1110654885 IP_ADDRESS>cache-rtc-ac03.proxy.aol.com PASSWORD>aatVdSJjThF22 PREVIOUS>84670 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

yoly

thanks for stopping by

appreciate it

guy perspective is all I got... :)

have not had a chance to comment on your revision but

quite a bit tighter though I do miss the

Now I know he can't sing line...

seemed to me to add a kind of poignancy to the piece

seemed rather

intimate somehow anyway

thanks again

peace

: Alex-

: I enjoyed the central idea here. Some of the
: language is marvelous. The ride was not
: entirely smooth, but you probably know that.
: Enjoyed the "guy perspective."

: Peace,
: Yoly