SUBJECT>Re: Black-Tie POSTER>Yoly EMAIL> DATE>1111009307 IP_ADDRESS>CFGW78.mybrighthouse.com PASSWORD>aaiEZds5BDMEY PREVIOUS>84888 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Hola Geoff

There's a strong possiblity of an affair with Neruda.
If that's a compliment: Thank you. If not: Thank you.
I couldn't keep this serious. I had too much fun.

Thank you for your always candid review.

Paz,
Yoly
: Re. Black-Tie

: For Yoly

: O gosh, O golly! How my heart goes pitter-pat!

: *

: There are streaks of romance, from the first
: line on, that take themselves far too
: seriously. Surely the beginning has had an
: intimate relationship with Neruda's early
: love poems?

: I am left untouched by what the mark was
: wearing. Or makeup. The reverse is
: unthinkable, isn't it?

: *

: When I had read the last stanza: Then he took
: my hand: voltage charged the undergrounds,

: passion took the flight up.

: The urban siren shook

: my middle-age doll-house.

: I really wondered. If I had dentures, I would
: have lost them.

: See here, this might work in a humorous piece,
: but believe me, this sounds strictly
: business.

: Best,

: Geoff

: *