SUBJECT>Re: final draft (2) POSTER>Asher EMAIL> DATE>1111343676 IP_ADDRESS>dyn129-100-215-79.alh.reznet.uwo.ca PREVIOUS>85104 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

GC--thanks. I realized when I awoke that I had written a lyrical poem (to my dismay), so I revised it slightly. Thanks for your consideration...ha. Yes, ambitious as hell. But I need a larger vocabulary etc. I think that the last post is the best I can do currently. Which usually means I'm done with it and couldn'r care less any more about. Onto new poems...or a bloody essay. Thanks again

AG

Asher,

: I'd love to comment on this one--it's very
: rich, very ambitious--but I'm not going to
: until you settle on a version, at least for,
: say, a 24-hour period. I get nervous at the
: thought of critiquing one version, all the
: while suspecting that while I'm critiquing
: the poet is in the process of posting a
: different one. It's a little like squirrel
: hunting, only the squirrels have
: higher-powered rifles than you do.

: --GC