SUBJECT>Re: Separtion (Major Redux) POSTER>Asher EMAIL> DATE>1111347678 IP_ADDRESS>dyn129-100-215-79.alh.reznet.uwo.ca PREVIOUS>85084 NEXT> 85123 IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>
Hi Bowan--
This is a lot better than the first few versions...Consider it complete, no? The only ineffectual word in here was "ache" and the obvious title, which detracts, I think, from a reader piecing the theme together herself. Thanks for posting this revision.
Best,
AG
Separation
: Words suggest what distance they can.
: But this morning we’re quieted, driving
: beside the river road.
: For a week, we walked under the kitchen
: of the world, above the rushes, rehearsing
: yellow light, circling the table as if our ache
: could forget. We were worn by walking;
: a car on this road could change our minds
: but out here, people hang themselves
: on the loose ledge of compassion. Wipers smear
: the winter road. At the bridge we stop,
: unbuckle our lives, climb the rail.