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Asher,

Thanks for the read and comments. "Ache" is out. LOL!

Thanks again.

A. Bowen

: Hi Bowan--

: This is a lot better than the first few
: versions...Consider it complete, no? The
: only ineffectual word in here was
: "ache" and the obvious title,
: which detracts, I think, from a reader
: piecing the theme together herself. Thanks
: for posting this revision.

: Best,
: AG

: Separation