SUBJECT>Re: friend's denial POSTER>geoff EMAIL>geoffleone@hotmail.com DATE>1111508460 IP_ADDRESS>uhall-backlab-158t.fdu.edu PASSWORD>aa3znsx.4y15U PREVIOUS>85179 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

RE. friend's denial.

For Nicole.

Believe it or not, Nicole, many lowlives here have already guessed that this piece is your own. Awful, isn't it? So don't talk to strangers here by any means!

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If your friend wishes to post his piece, he is welcome to do so. That he needs a third party to do it, is a dubious proposition. After all, it might be simply tremendous, and someone else, perhaps you, will run off with it and make a mint of money.

In short, aside from sticking your sweet neck in many painful ways, you probably have no legal right in this life or the next to post someone else's work.

Passing Thought on Life's Journey,

Geoff

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: hello fellow writers. well i'm a young writer
: who has been into the art for a number of
: years now. and just recently i found a
: friend of mine has written poetry before but
: never mentioned it to anyone. he wanted
: honest critism on it. but would not believe
: when i told him that i love it. so i was
: wondering if you bunch could give the piece
: a bit of feedback. it would be greatly
: appreciated. :)

: No Clue

: memories that block out our very reality
: staines our mind to help us remember
: stains like blood on the whiteness of life
: staines to help us remember
: to help us remember our hard times
: to help us remember that we arent alone, or
: more alone that we think
: like a caged evil, boils our mind
: it gets out sometimes
: and in letting it out it reminds us that there
: is pain

: It sits in a void which only happyness
: vangishes
: a void that is filled with a lifetime of pain
: untill the absent of happyness is not absent
: the void will remain
: but the blood on our hands will never wash away
: its there to remind
: of better times
: and to go for those times again
: would be the happyest
: one that lets his mind be traped in a title
: has more blood on his hands than any
: to fill the foid...........
: to find the one........
: lesson learend.........

: dont strive for attention
: if attention was meant to be your u will have
: it
: think un evil thoughts
: for evil is the door that unhappyness contains
: to unleash our evil
: is a crime that goes unpunished for
: its the choices we make that will bring us to
: were we are destined
: the glow of dark
: will shake the world