SUBJECT>Re: China Town (Draft 1) POSTER>Asher EMAIL> DATE>1111535987 IP_ADDRESS>dbwlib04.weldon.lib.uwo.ca PREVIOUS>85199 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>
Thanks for reading, sir. Appreciate the comments.
Kindest,
AG
RE. China Town
: For Asher.
: I have no interest in discovering which is the
: latest of a jumble of drafts. A furtive
: practice to my mind.
: *
: The version I read jumped from place to place
: without reference to what came before or
: after and that is refreshing or horrid
: depending.
: The last half felt the need to anchor its
: insubstantiality by using "I" all
: the time. It simply underlined the
: insubstantiality.
: Thank you for the experience.
: Best,
: Geoff
: *
: Yes, there was consolidation in