SUBJECT>Re: China Town (Draft 1) POSTER>Asher EMAIL> DATE>1111535987 IP_ADDRESS>dbwlib04.weldon.lib.uwo.ca PREVIOUS>85199 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Thanks for reading, sir. Appreciate the comments.

Kindest,

AG

RE. China Town

: For Asher.

: I have no interest in discovering which is the
: latest of a jumble of drafts. A furtive
: practice to my mind.

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: The version I read jumped from place to place
: without reference to what came before or
: after and that is refreshing or horrid
: depending.

: The last half felt the need to anchor its
: insubstantiality by using "I" all
: the time. It simply underlined the
: insubstantiality.

: Thank you for the experience.

: Best,

: Geoff

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: Yes, there was consolidation in