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i will tell you what didnt do it for me...(not at all meant as a personal attack)

it was boring. the words seemed tired and worn. to me, it didnt matter if there was a clever break, or perfect meter...the subject didnt interest me.

just being honest - i am not saying it is bad writing or there was/wasn't something clever said

it was like reading a coloring book where someone managed to color within the lines - it was nice and showed skill, but the lines were there for the artist already. it felt restrained by its own topic/subject