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i enjoyed this -- but felt the poet trrying too hard for the surreal. sometimes it takes a softer touch. i offer this edit for another look.

my lobster sandwich says: i don't love
the sound of oboes anymore. geraniums
wilt under kitchen lights. if our waitress came
from copenhagen, napkins are slinking
leaves amongst the gumbo. the epilogue is :
the most beautiful woman
when patrick swayze lights a cigarette
his thumb flick sends an ember flying.
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