SUBJECT>Oncology POSTER>Bowen EMAIL> DATE>1111712351 IP_ADDRESS>216.60.12.197 PREVIOUS>85422 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Slosh,

You're right. A porno poem would've been more interesting.

: There is nothing in this that draws me in as a
: reader—

: The opening line I wondered if I had stumbled
: into a porn poem That should/would have
: stopped me reading.

: But as it continued I found myself skipping
: words to get to the end—your job as poet is
: the make me slow, and read everything twice-
: you the poet failed the poem—

: Put it to death