SUBJECT>Re: The Ghosts of Cambodia (CTG) POSTER>JackM EMAIL> DATE>1111822329 IP_ADDRESS>1Cust2439.an3.den10.da.uu.net PASSWORD>aa3rfqIypCINk PREVIOUS>85417 NEXT> 85510 IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Hi, Christopher.

While each stanza, especially the first three, holds its own, I think this poem might be strongest as stanzas two and three only. Or if I'm missing something big, and you're loathe to cut, then I'd add more stanzas, complicate it with more ghosts, make it long.

Yours,
Jack