SUBJECT>Re: Pools POSTER>Bowen EMAIL> DATE>1112140041 IP_ADDRESS>cache-dtc-ac03.proxy.aol.com PREVIOUS>85636 NEXT> IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

All I want is a critique, not some veiled typing. Say what you mean and don't try to be so coy. I like the direct approach, y'know?

: Re. Pools.

: For Bowen.

: People say silly things about their own poems
: all the time. Not so silly things about
: others' work. There lies a mystery there.

: I read your piece and called it as I saw it. I
: regret that this was not enough for you.
: Note. I find your tone unpleasant.

: Best,

: Geoff

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