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Line 1 - 8th couplet has 5 stresses in an otherwise tetrameter poem.

That [o]nly [se]conds [in] the [live]ly [glim]mer
The poet muse began to simmer.

An alternative line:

where only seconds through the glimmer
the poet muse began to simmer.

where [on]ly [sec]onds[ through] the [glim]mer
the poet muse began to simmer.

VSP