SUBJECT>Re: After Infidelity POSTER>Michael (MV) EMAIL> DATE>1112837354 EMAILNOTICES>no IP_ADDRESS>server4.samford.edu PREVIOUS>85887 NEXT> 85892 IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>
Perhaps there is a more dynamic title.
Summer again - consider expressing this imagistically - an indicator of Summer again.
. . the field is stacked
with good intentions.
^^ really liked
the blisters he sees are other wounds
he’s made without a single touch
to my skin.
^^ liked; also good stanza segue there.
I like the close; yet, might consider as:
Beans float on the greasy film;
I cup them like miracles in waiting.
Best Regards,
MV