SUBJECT>Re: After Infidelity POSTER>Michael (MV) EMAIL> DATE>1112837354 EMAILNOTICES>no IP_ADDRESS>server4.samford.edu PREVIOUS>85887 NEXT> 85892 IMAGE> LINKNAME> LINKURL>

Perhaps there is a more dynamic title.

Summer again - consider expressing this imagistically - an indicator of Summer again.

. . the field is stacked
with good intentions.

^^ really liked

the blisters he sees are other wounds
he’s made without a single touch

to my skin.

^^ liked; also good stanza segue there.

I like the close; yet, might consider as:

Beans float on the greasy film;
I cup them like miracles in waiting.

Best Regards,

MV