A Novel Excerpt by David Ohle
The French Sewer
As dawn broke, Hilter stood shivering outside the entrance to the French
Sewer. He, his arresting officer and twenty or thirty others under sentence,
waited for Mr. Montfaucon, the superintendent.
When he came he brought a cartload of white tunics, rubber boots, rakish blue
caps, and rabots--long poles with paddles on one end--and distributed these
among the prisoners.
"Attention now," barked the officer. "Listen carefully to Monsieur
Montfaucon while you put on your tunics and boots."
Standing under a banner that said Visite en Égout, Montfaucon spoke through
a newspaper rolled into a cone. A squat, pig headed man, his high pitched
squeal grated on Hilter's ear. "The procedure is simple. Use the rabot to
break up clumps when you see them. Push the material along. Let the water do
its work without all that obstruction."
Hilter, leaning against a banquette to pull on his boots, heard a familiar
voice from behind. "It's me, Hilter. Ola Harp."
"Ola? You're under sentence? For what?"
"For vomiting up what seemed like a bucketful of horsehead pudding in
Sapodilla Park last night."
"This is absurd and unreasonable!" Hilter stamped his foot on the wet,
slime-coated sidewalk, his shoulders sinking under the weight of his
predicament. "Share the guilt ... share the punishment. What kind of legal
system is that?"
"There's a new President," Ola said. "Michael Ratt. A bit addled in the
head. And he's only thirteen. Completely unschooled. May as well take your
punishment like everyone else. What's a few weeks in the sewer?" Mr.
Montfaucon peeked through a rust hole in the sewer door, then turned to
address the prisoners again, swaying right to left on the balls of his feet.
"Today, being a Monday, and yesterday being the Lord's day, I wouldn't be
surprised to see very, very heavy clumping. And we must be quick, too.
Remember, the tour boats begin running very shortly."
The officer delivered his fmal instruction, before leaving his prisoners in
Mr. Montfaucon's charge. "Take your positions along either wall, have your
rabot at the ready. It's just about opening time. And for Pete's sake,
take a few deep breaths while you can."
The tall, rusted iron doors of the sewer entrance yawned open and a warm,
foul burst of moist air spilled forth.
"If it weren't so damned random," Hilter said. "And whimsical."
"Ratt is playing with us like little toys," Ola said. "You'd think there'd
be resistance, somewhere. Uprisings. But no. There's nothing at all. The
nights and days ... absolutely still."
It was time for Montfaucon to make his final statements. "Do not forget.
These new sewers are a spectacle of enlightenment, so well maintained that a
lady dressed in her finest can take a boat tour from the Squat 'n' Gobble to
the Ice Palace without fear of fatigue and without stepping in anything
unclean."
As the prisoners marched slowly into the sewer, Ola positioned herself behind
Hilter, so that as they walked alongside the ditch, breaking up clumps, they
were able to talk freely without being heard by the others.
Before long, the tour boat came to a bend. Well dressed German settlers, men
and women, sat in comfortable seats. Two of the men were firing small-caliber
pistols at rats as they went, the sound echoing up and down the sewer tunnel.
Monsieur Montfaucon, standing in the boat with his paper megaphone, spoke to
the tourists: "Everyone knows that no foreigner of distinction wants to leave
French Settlement without making this singular trip. Notice the rows of
lamps, each provided with its silvered reflector. See how they grow fainter
and fainter as we move along, how they light up the vaulted gallery and cast
their reflections in the black, turgid water at our feet? Don't the
white-robed prisoners look like so many ghosts? People who have seen
everything say the French Sewer is perhaps the most beautiful sight in the
world. The temperature is so mild, the odor so slight that--"
One of the small-caliber pistols discharged without warning. Montfaucon and
the tourists looked all around to see if a rat had been hit. Even Hilter
looked around for a dead one, until the boat had continued some distance.
Then his knees lost all sensation and he collapsed. Had it not been for Ola's
thrusting out her rabot to stop him, he would have rolled into the ditch.
"I'm hit," he yelped. "I'm hit in the face!"
Ola examined his face and found that the bullet had entered one cheek,
smashed his only sound tooth, and lay like a leaden pill on his tongue.
"Not serious," she said.
"Not serious? A man shoots me like a common rat? It could have been fatal."
He spat out the flattened disk of lead and the crumbs of his tooth.
"But it wasn't. Let's not stir things up. Put some mummy oil on that and
you'll heal just fine."
One of the other prisoners said, "Here comes Montfaucon. Shut up! He's got
a terrible temper."
Montfaucon was pulling a German along by the collar. "Goddamned kraut! You
won't get away with shooting any prisoners while I'm around."
"It's too late," Ola said.
Montfaucon stood the German in front of Hilter. "You've put a hole in this
man's face. What do you have to say for yourself?"
"It was an accident. The pistol fired accidentally."
"Typically Teutonic response, I'd say. Now, you see that clump there, in the
ditch? Do you?"
"Yes, Monsieur."
"Get down on your knees and have a mouthful of it!"
"Acht! Merde. No, please. Miséricorde!"
"You want me to shoot you?" Montfaucon placed the barrel of the pistol in
the German's ear. "With such a small projectile, intended for a rat, you
could be left a crack-brained invalid for the rest of your misbegotten life.
Better to eat shit, I'd say." The hammer of the pistol was cocked with a snap
that echoed up and down the lamplit tunnel.
The German submitted to the humiliation, kneeling and keeping his head close
to the floor until he had swallowed the mouthful. He could be heard to weep,
in bursts, throughout the process, and when it was all over, he knelt over the
ditch and threw it all back up.
Montfaucon gave the pistol to Hilter. "Here, shoot him in the cheek. Tit
for tat."
Hilter hesitated. "If it was an accident.... I'd just as soon let him go.
He's had enough, I think."
"All right, then.... He says to let you go." Montfaucon placed the pistol
again in the German's ear, this time firing two shots in quick succession.
Unconscious, perhaps dead, the German fell into the ditch. "There, you're
free to go.... All right, prisoners. Now you've got a true clump of shit to
push with your rabot. Get busy. Except you." He was pointing to Ola.
"You'll kindly come along with me. An officer awaits to take you into
custody."
"The charge?" Ola asked.
"Charge? Why, killing an innocent man by shooting him twice in the head.
Isn't it perfectly obvious? Do you have a Waiver?"
"No. I've tried to get one, but--"
Saying, "Ahh ... Killing a German. No Waiver. It'll be Valdosta, 8
months," Montfaucon escorted Ola out of the sewer and into the bright noonday
sun.
Hilter stuck his little finger through the hole in his cheek, which bled
remarkably little, then took up his rabot.
On his way to the sewer the following morning, Hilter stopped at the Squat
'n' Gobble for a bite of breakfast, ducking under the tattered canvas awning
as a drizzle thickened into a tea-colored shower. He took the only empty seat
at the counter.
The cafe occupied a natural cavern in a hillside and a warm, carbonic gas
always percolated through the floor. Sometimes insidious, the gas was without
an odor. Customers who lingered overlong were known to fall over,
half-suffocated.
Wencel, the waiter, said "What'll it be, Hilter? The breakfast special is
tripe with high bologna."
"High bologna? How unusual. Isn't it always in short supply?"
"Not any more. Not since Dorothy Peters took office. She's opened up
trading in it again." A cockroach crawled through Wencel's beard as he served
Hilter's tripe and roots, adding to it a black, twisted coil about two inches
long that had the sheen of licorice and the consistency of hog's hide.
"There's your bologna."
An officer of the court entered and stood at attention near the door.
"Attention! Attention, please! I have an announcement to make. Stand by for
an important announcement..."
Wencel grew excited. "Must be a new government or something."
The officer held up a placard that said FIGHT WORMS FOR A WORM FREE WORLD.
"Here now. The new President reminds you--fight worms for a worm-free world.
Everyone is encouraged to check their stool daily for larva. The penalty for
neglect? A year in the French sewer.
When the officer left, going on to the next establishment to make his
announcement, Hilter said, "Hey Wencel, what happened to Michael Ratt?"
"Bitten by a rabid skunk. Out hunting frozen heads on Holly Island. Dead in
a matter of hours."
"Oh, well." Hilter chewed the high balogney with his rotted, aching teeth.
"Such is life," he said.
Hilter's mother, feeling unusually fit one morning, put on her clogs and
pedal pushers and went for an outing. Pedaling her little canvas-canopied car
all the way to Sapodilla Park, she planned to attend the dedication of a
newly-built Oswaldian temple. An additional part of the scheduled festivities
was a musical performance by the Chatterjee Brothers, featuring vocals by the
flum soloist, Amanda Futch Sinatra.
Also in attendance was one of the week's presidential candidates, Red Cane,
noted Pisstown vivisectionist. An honor guard of plume-hatted Oswaldians drew
up to see Mr. Cane lay the cornerstone of their new temple. They watched him
smooth the first applications of mortar with a silver trowel.
Later, during a Chatterjee take-five, Hilter's mother signed up for a guided
tour of the new temple. Round, as almost all Oswaldian temples were, it
consisted of a simple circular walkway around Oswald Man's catafalque. One
always had to keep moving, never looking too long at the calcified corpse that
swam alluringly in a pool of light falling from the domed, glass roof.
An Oswaldian choir stood near the catafalque, reciting Oswald's legendary
Last List again and again, in hypnotically monotonous voices: "Typing ...
crystal for watch ... job ... bank account ... mail ... job ... haircut ... library
... plug for radio ... haircut...."
Amid this distraction, Hilter's mother felt something underfoot, felt it
crush beneath her clog. She slipped and fell to the floor. Feeling a sharp
pain in the hip, she looked up for help, but saw what no settler ever hoped to
see, an angry officer rushing toward her.
"You're going to be cited for this!"
She turned over her clog and looked at the heel, to which was stuck the
flattened, slimy remains of a slug. "For this?"
"Exactly, you sag-breasted old cow. You've stepped on one of the temple
slugs.... Do you have a Waiver?"
"I do." She took it from her handbag and gave it to the officer.
"What do you take me for, a goon? This is ancient, issued during the Ratt
administration. Now, completely bogus. Moreover, it's a punishable offense
just to have an out-of-date Waiver in your possession."
"So sorry. So hard to keep up. Must we get a new one every time a new
president takes office. We'll be spending the rest of our lives standing in
lines."
"Your name, please, you insolent, ugly old whore."
"Agnes Hilter."
The officer took a step backward. "The Agnes Hilter, inventor of edible
money?
"Yes. That's me."
"All the more reason to punish you, puffgut. My own father choked to death
eating your currency. Thousands of us did."
"My sincerest regrets, but I can't be held responsible for that, can I?"
"And just why not? If you were struck by an arrow, which would you blame,
the archer or the arrow?"
"The archer, of course.
"Exactment! So if you think for a moment you're getting away with this
abomination, think again. What, pray tell, makes your life more lofty than
that poor mollusk you've snuffed like a guttering candle?"
"It was unavoidable. Accidents happen ... in the course of events."
Others on the tour, mostly settlers, had gathered around to watch the
altercation in silence, as if it were a little show, a dramatte.
The officer, consulting a list of new and revised ordinances, said, "Here we
are ... 'inattentive walking in a temple.' You'll do a year at Valdosta."
On boarding the Noctule for the two-day trip to Valdosta, Ola felt wretched
almost at once. Something in the air was so disagreeable it made her spit up
even though her stomach was empty. In the prisoners' dormitory the odor was worse
than anywhere else, more severe than in the French Sewer, where the
olefactories adjusted in time. Here, there was no adjustment. The nostrils
were in constant rebellion, the stomach always cramped.
"Rats, what's that stink?" asked the bald, surgically deformed woman in the
next bunk.
"Cadaverine," was Ola's reply.
A horse's eye, unblinking, looked at Ola from the woman's forehead.
"Arful, ain't it? That smell." Her gaze was depthless, lending it
incorrectly the impression of wisdom. The original eyes had been removed, the
sockets sewn shut. "Makes you feel dead every time you breathe."
"Totally negativo," Ola said.
"They got 'em a whole load 'o necronauts on board. Got 'em stored in the
cargo bay right below where we're s'posed to sleep. Now, if that don't make
me madder than a dog-bit bog rat.
An officer entered the dormitory with a wooden clacker, then paced up and
down the aisles making an ear-splitting racket. "Breakfast is being served in
the refectory. Form lines and make for there immediately ... unless you want
your starch to harden before you eat it."
In the refectory, Ola spotted Agnes Hilter sitting with a grotesquely
swollen, three-eyed man she didn't know. "Mrs. Hilter," she said. "So good
to see you."
The three-eyed man introduced himself in a friendly and cordial manner.
"Hello, ladies. I'm Fredo, Fredo Muller."
"Please, dear," said Mrs. Hilter, "sit with us. Who's your friend?"
"I'm Lola, from Oaken Homer," said the horse-eyed woman. "I love that
eye-thing you've got going there, Fredo."
"Oh, yes. Isn't it wonderful. Triple-sightedness. A delight to have. I'm
completely satisfied. And, say, yours isn't anything to be ashamed of,
either. What is it? Cow?"
"No, horse. It sees things in a pretty simple way, you know, but it's a lot
of fun. Makes me feel rambunctious sometimes. All I want to do is run around
a pasture and whinny."
Ola asked Lola what crime she was going to Valdosta for.
"Eatin' stuffed mud duck on Mummy Day. Hell, if'n you cain't read, how're
you s'posed to know the laws?"
"And you, Mrs. Hilter? What sort of horrible crime did you commit?"
"Stepped on a temple slug and nearly broke my sacrum."
Lola said, "I got me three months in the French Sewer for passing gas in a
temple."
"Awful. Just awful." Fredo asked Ola about her crimes.
"Killing a German ... in the French sewer. What about you, Fredo?"
"Sexing in public. This is my third trip. The other two were escaping from
a turpentine camp, and keeping bog rats in my home. Frankly, I'd rather be at
Valdosta than any place I can think of."
"So I've heard," said Mrs. Hilter.
"Everyone has a small cabin in the woods. Lovely streams, mountain vistas.
All necessities supplied. The skies are always clear, the weather always
clement."
"All true," said Fredo. "Everyone has a job to do. A self-sustaining little
community of souls.... Just pray they don't assign you necronaut-cleansing
duty. You have to wash them, rub them with mummy oil, tell them stories,
teach them the realities of 'living' with no frame of reference. Worse, you
have to listen to them complain eternally about the frosty discomforts of
death."
"They say," Ola said, "that fuel is plentiful in the afterworld, but
distances are great. I read that in The Age of Oswald."
"Now, If I could read, there's a book I would," said Lola, blinking a copious
tear from the horse's eye.
The food cart rolled by as prisoners ladeled starch into their bowls, topping
that with a few sticks of high bologna. When the cart went too fast, some
prisoners got no helping at all. When it slowed down, greedy eaters took two
or three times the normal serving. Why the officer insisted on this unfair,
random pace, was the subject of much under-the-breath discussion at the
tables.
"I do hope I get some," Ola said. "I'm starving."
"I'm sick of starch and bologna," Fredo sighed, after serving himself only a
half bowl and waiting for the flum to pedal out of earshot. "They've got no
imagination when it comes to food. When Michael Ratt died, I thought there
would be policy changes, improvements."
The officer in charge of the refectory was making rounds, fingering a billy
bat and toting a shoulder bag full of two-inch-long cockleburrs, looking hard
for any offense to punish.
"Officer! Officer! Over here!" It was a prisoner sitting near Fredo.
"This man was complaining about the food. I heard him. He said, 'I'm sick of
all this starch and bologna.' He said you have no imagination when it comes to the
culinary arts. What does he want, stuffed mud duck at every meal? I think he
should be punished. Right here and now."
The officer wasted no time in getting to Fredo, climbing over tables, running
up and down the aisles between tables. "What's the trouble here?"
"No trouble," Ola said.
The tattle-tale piped up again. "That one. Complaining about the starch and
bologna. What nerve."
The officer reached into a pouch and withdrew a cocklebur. "Stand up, you
ingrate."
"This is my third trip, officer. My third sentence. Mind you, all the
charges were spurious. I was never guilty once. Surely, taking that into
consideration, you can see your way to overlook a moment of carping."
"Please, officer," Ola pleaded, "spare him this. Not in front of all these
prisoners."
Her intreaty was ignored. "Stand up, Mr. Complainer!"
"Oh, boy," said the delighted tattle-tale. "This'll be good."
"Take down those pants. Take down those drawers."
Fredo was in tears. "Not the cocklebur, please."
"Bend over, you. Spread the cheeks."
Doing so, looking all the while at the huge cocklebur, he was almost in a
faint. "Damnation," he muttered. "If I only had a waiver.
The officer calmed, breaking into a smile. "A waiver? You want a waiver? I
have whole pocket full."
"You'll give me a waiver?"
"Sell is the word. Sell."
"How much?"
"One zil-guida should get you one."
"Jumping Jesus, that's beyond me. I don't have the means."
"Good enough, then." The officer placed the tip of the cocklebur against
Fredo's anus and began pushing it with his billy bat. "I don't want to hear
any whining, either."
"Wait! Wait!" It was Mrs. Hilter's urgent voice. "I'll pay. I'll pay."
Fredo gladly hitched up his trousers. "Thank you, kind lady. Thank you."
"It's nothing," said Hilter. "What's a zil to a rich woman like me? You
could be my son."
"Consider yourself a lucky man." The officer handed Fredo a waiver, then
took the zil from Hilter and ate it. "Now, sit down and eat your starch, you
obsequious lout, you. And no more complaining.... Did I mention, by the way,
that a waiver is good for one offense only?"
"No, actually."
"And I'll always be watching you. Don't ever rest easy, my good man."
Fredo sat down and lapped at his starch like a hungry dog.
Ola, emboldened by a strain of mettle that ran through the Harp line like a
stream through a valley, spoke out. "Sir? May I ask a question ... why must
you heap these indignities upon us on every occasion?"
The officer allowed a few moments of contemplation before giving an answer.
"Why not?"
The next evening, prisoners were allowed a generous period for toileting.
They were told to undress in front of their bunks, that their clothes would be
laundered while they toileted, and were marched into the public room. Before
entering, each was given a handful of pre-edible paper for wiping and a small
cake of caustic soda soap. A single bucket of depilatory had to be shared by
dozens of prisoners.
"Remember two things, please," said the officer-in-charge as prisoners went
about their business. "One--every single hair must be removed. You will be
inspected very closely. You come to Valdosta the same way come to
life--without raiment, without preconception, without worms, and without hair.
And let me remind you again, of what the new president has been saying till
he's blue in the face--fight worms for a worm free world. So when your stool
is in the pan, check it for movement, for tiny, almost unnoticeable
encapsulations, for anything suspicious. If you see something, call me over
for a look." The officer then went from prisoner to prisoner, poking through
stool with a wooden stick, sometimes raising the pan for a long, thoughtful,
diagnostic sniff.
Fredo and Mrs. Hilter, squatting side by side over their pans, conversed as
best they could between grunts, gasps, strainings and sighs of relief.
"My dear son, it's so nice to see you, even under these dreary
circumstances," she said.
"Excuse me, Mrs. Hilter, but my thought is, my impression is, my feeling is,
I'm not your son."
"Oh, my. Now that I look, I see you're not. I suppose its eyeworms.
"Could be," said Fredo. "They say they'll overtake a person's vision very
quietly, on cat's feet." He lifted one buttock a little and gave a push.
Hearing the flop of his stool in the pan, he wiped, then knelt to examine it. He saw, to
his dismay, a small, white worm, hair-thin, wound in a knot and struggling to
untie itself. "Oh, damnit," he said. "I've got them.... Officer? Over
here!"
"Just a moment. Just a moment. Can't you see I've got my hands full?"
"Sorry, sir."
When it came time for Fredo's inspection, the officer plucked the worm away
from the stool with the end of the stick, then held it up for all to see.
"Attention, everyone! Attention! Look at this. This is the species you
should all be looking for--tubularia Mobii--the memory worm. It has two
sides, as you can see, but only one surface."
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